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I’m not a big fan for when the previous romantic/sexual feelings for women are wiped away, but I like how this is a slow burn, and he’s struggling with it—your pacing overall is great
ReplyDeleteOne thing I’d love to see is, given they’re twins, and they’re all presumably in the same grade, Dylan in his sister’s body spending time and talking to Tiffany. Possibly even trying to reassert his masculinity by trying to vie for Tiffany’s affections?
Well, Dylan still hopes to return to his body soon and then be Tiffany's boyfriend. He is not interested in conquering her in his sister's body, both because it would make no sense for him to "steal" the girl from his future "self" (hopefully), and because in his new body he is less and less "romantically" interested in her. Thank you so much for the interesting comment!
DeleteIt’s more “as he loses hope on switching back, does he simply fall into the role of his sister, or fight against it?”, but yes, it makes sense he still has hope
DeleteAlso, the magic spirit or whatever shouldn’t solely be angry at Dylan, his sister is acting a bit like a jerk too