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11/8/20

Asylum therapy (part 2)

(voiceover): "Hello little sister! I'm sorry I didn't come to see you this month, but I've been busy. I think the two months you spent in this asylum helped you. The doctor told me you're making great progress. You stopped repeating those follies about magic and body swapping. If you continue like this, you can go home in a month or two. Are you happy? Unfortunately you'll miss my wedding. Your ex... whoopsie... my girlfriend was so happy when I asked her to marry me three weeks ago. We both wanted you as a bridesmaid, but we understand that now you have to focus on getting over this... nervous breakdown. Now I have to go. We will meet again in three weeks, after my honeymoon. Bye little sister, rest and get better!" 

She will pay for it. I don't know how yet, but my sister will pay for it. I'll be out of this damn asylum in a month, and find a way to get my life back!

[The End]

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16 comments:

  1. Marissa EllissonNovember 8, 2020 at 8:17 PM

    On I love the mean taunting her former sister is giving her.

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    1. Fantasy World TGNovember 9, 2020 at 8:17 AM

      But now his broth... well... his new sister is even more motivated to take revenge. This attitude is dangerous

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    2. Marissa EllissonNovember 10, 2020 at 8:01 PM

      I doubt any revenge is going to win him his body back. So she wins either way.

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    3. Fantasy World TGNovember 11, 2020 at 2:24 AM

      Well, it's difficult, but it's not already decided. She may find out what magic was used. Or she could accept her new body and find happiness anyway. Or the sister (now brother) could do even worse... The ending is open, as always: it's up to you to decide her fate ;)

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  2. Leslie BNovember 9, 2020 at 5:24 AM

    great horror story!

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  3. AnonymousNovember 9, 2020 at 4:37 PM

    Agreed, great horror story!

    I'd love to read more like this, where the protagonist is the heartbroken bridesmaid at what was supposed to be their own wedding.

    Imagine being transformed into a girl, forced to wear a beautiful bridesmaid dress, and act feminine as your girlfriend marries the antagonist, who's stolen your body.

    Imagine what the antagonist would do if you tried to tell everyone the truth!

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    1. Fantasy World TGNovember 10, 2020 at 4:51 AM

      Thanks! I've done a similar caption before, probably in May: maid of honor stealing the groom's body. Use the "Identity Theft" tag (here on the right) to find it quickly. I will definitely do more of this kind in the future ;)

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    2. IndigoNovember 10, 2020 at 3:58 PM

      That was one of my favourite ones you've done! I just loved how evil it was, haha

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    3. Fantasy World TGNovember 11, 2020 at 2:25 AM

      Ahahah Thanks Indigo ;)

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    4. Marissa EllissonNovember 11, 2020 at 7:25 AM

      Anonymous do yourself a favor and read this story. http://www.storysite.org/story/trust~01.html

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    5. AnonymousNovember 11, 2020 at 12:45 PM

      Thank you for the story recommendation Marissa! I really enjoyed reading it.

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    6. Marissa EllissonNovember 11, 2020 at 4:58 PM

      Isn’t it hot?!

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  4. IndigoNovember 11, 2020 at 5:56 AM

    haha my pleasure, as always!

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  5. JenniferFebruary 13, 2021 at 9:23 AM

    Very sadictively done. I Love it !

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  6. ZapperDecember 27, 2021 at 9:47 AM

    Great story, I love the taunting.

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